To pledge, "Together to the end",
Is a common thing among many a friend.
Promising to prevail through and through:
Despair and hope, yellow and blue.
Menacing monsters will come along,
To challenge this pair's diligent song.
But this luminous triumph will inspire
Much strength in order to keep the choir.
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AWESOME poem, Karen! Your rhymes fit together perfectly and the vocab you use is very meritorious.
ReplyDeleteI promise to always be your friend
No matter where our lives bend.
:) <3
Thanks Lian!
ReplyDeleteThat just made my day
:)
Great job, Karen!! This is such a great poem filled with exellent vocabulary. Your rhymes also fit really well! :D
ReplyDeleteThis is such a great entry and it's so true. Your rhymes -- like Allie said -- also fit very well. Nice job Karen! :)
ReplyDeleteWOW Karen, this is one of the best poems that I have ever read!!! The rhyming and voice really makes the poem great! Like Lian,
ReplyDeleteI promise to always be your friend
No matter where our lives bend.